by Friskee_cpl
Unfortunately, it is not an accurate reflection on the etiquette of dogging. Touching only after an initial request to do so and a definite confirmation. No bad language/ name calling unless it's again ok'd by, in this story, the woman. Nor Cumming on or in the body without agreement.
Love it. know the feeling from the outside of the car when you get a good Fucker/Sucker
While the storyline was good, it would be improved if you made the storyteller/narrator consistent. Sometimes, the narrator is writing in the first person (I, me, we, us, etc) and at other times he is writing in the third person (he, she, him, her, they, them or calling them by their names). When you switch from the first to the third person, the reader gets distracted wondering if there are more people in the car.
Good writing! Looking for more of Sharon and Marcus! Thomas (from Germany)
Great story. Had me ready to spurt. Would like to hear more of your dogging adventures and love to see photo of friskee Sharon.
midas97 @ hotmail.com
Very entertaining and arousing story. I hope the story doesn't end there. You left me hanging on the edge of my seat.
Love to see what Sharon looks like.
jles333@gmail.com
Loved it, would love to read more
youarethedemons@hotmail.co.uk
Great story. Love stories that have plenty of cum. Where do you meet women like Sharon? Sanctaeva@aol.com
I've never been dogging but after reading this I need to find where this goes on in my area. Would love to dog a slutty wife with her hubby and a bunch of other guys watching! Fucking hot!
Story changes tense from 3rd person to 1st person right in the middle. Makes for a confusing read!!!
Yes some one there said thhat we don't do that inthe USA but he is wrong. My wife has been fucked by groups several times in a bar. Everyone watched and took their turn . Her cunt was full of cum as well as her mouth and ass, when we went home. What a sight to see severalmen fuck her.
A warning that is given AFTER opening story isn't worth jack shit and voids any "you can't make a negative comment" bullshit.
I loved this story. No one dogges in America, but my wife and i would love to experience it. To watch all those men watching her as we fuck, to see her get out and take on all cummers. It get's both of us hot and wet. Nice story Keep them cumming
John, joecamle2002@yahoo.com
I want to move there haha, lets teach my wife how to behave like this !!
more episodes please...How far will they go?