by Lynda68
It was vary good but to short.Are you going to continue with more chapters?
"It was vary good..."
Not sure why you bothered saying anything nice about the story, She already posted, " If you have left a comment anonymously. I don't give a fuck what you think." That logically covers good and bad comments.
I could've done without him eating his own cum. But otherwise it seems an erotic tale of freakish chance and wild opportunity. In short, I like it. Cept for the gay shit. Stop making him eat his cum
Enjoyable story, hope there is more to come. Could do with a bit of editing to improve it.
I found the story not only well written but quite entertaining. Well done. 5/5