by GoodGirlsDeserveFun
Very nice, but have you ever considered posting just a POV vid of this happening.
Unfortunately not all of your critics will be kind and I must admit that I am one of them. What was the point of this: There was a lot of slapping a wee bit of moaning and the first part of your story ended and that was it.
But if you have any more more chapters I will definitely rereview and see about giving you a decent review instead of this one.
Love the sound of you doing yourself... thanks for sharing. I'll be in my bunk...