All Comments on 'Shawn and Kendall Ch. 17'

I'm confused. She called the police and talked to a dispatcher then didn't call the police?

Oh LORD, the anticipation!! It's really something to see how loving and supportive Shawn is, despite not being ready for fatherhood. But we knew he was the one for her all along. Outstanding chapter. 5/5

Hi, since I have a policy of not starting multi-part stories until they're finished (been burned too many times with either abandoned or neverending stories) do you have a sense for how many more chapters this story will go?

TiA

Interesting. Didn't anticipate the story going in this direction. It's not a bad thing but I personally would have written it different. The bit with Brad was a little dramatic, I sense that this will not be the last we see of him. Really nice story you have here. These two never let us down. Can't wait for the next installment :).

I’m totally hooked on this story and have hopes for many more chapters to come. This story is going great and I am so interested in the characters and story combined. Thank you and keep it coming!!

You’re killing ya with the anticipation! Please let the pregnancy tests come out positive? They’re so deeply in love with each other. They would make excellent parents and I would love to see them navigate a pregnancy while also continuing their love.

Ok like the story and the pace. Just please don’t do something unnecessary like trying to redeem Grace. She’s a piece of 💩 and just needs to get flushed. Hate to say but I’ve read stories where lowdown characters have been all the sudden forgiven and it just ruins the outcome. So just please don’t do that here.

This story is amazing but if you are in delay or decide not to continue the advancement. Please let the readers know. I look daily for the next part and disappointed for no new updates.

Need some resolution. Hate Grace and Bradley. Marcie Rocks.

Hi there. I was wondering whether you were going to complete this wonderful romance story?

Pretty much given up on updates on this :(

DO NOT let this story end here!!! Wonderfully written, character build-up has been fantastic, hoping for a wonderfully happy ending, despite all that seem to working against it.

I have to have closure with this story. Extremely well written that has me completely invested and frustrated, waiting for chapter 18.

Yup, must admit I am enjoying the story but so nasty, leaving it with a cliff hanger - especially for sooo long.

Great story, really enjoying it so far! Please don’t leave it on a cliffhanger like this!

Hope this amazing story will be continued one day.

C'mon man.... Please continue!!!!!!

This is getting good, i wanna see Shawn beat the shit out of Bradley.

CONTINUE THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!

I wanna say WOW, what an amazing build-up... I love slow-burn bro/sis story like this one it just feels so natural and unforced, and especially if it leads to the couple having a baby in the end. Pls continue this, it's such a shame if it ended with a cliffhanger... 🙏

I beg you. Please continue this story this is blue ball of the century

Hello,

Thank you all for reading. Sorry to leave everyone hanging. Chapter 18 has been submitted and will go up as soon as an admin reviews it. Chapter 19 is also finished and being combed through for spelling, grammar, and continuity. That will be submitted soon after.

My deepest thanks for all the engagement with this story. I did not think it would generate this amount of positive feedback. It truly has made all the difference in my decision to share it at all. These comments make me glad I did.

All the best,

- SnK

Admin needs to hurry up

SnK looking forward to Chapters 18 & 19 and what is up after that for these characters. The word invested doesn’t even come close when thinking of the characters in this story and it’s a great read! Thanks!! Doc