All Comments on 'She Comes'

Awesome. I laughed my ass off when found his hiding place. Was that meant to be funny?

Hello Awesome Anon -

I love that word AWESOME I need to work it into my stories very, very often.

YES, I love that, was it meant to be funny? haha.

I'm assuming you meant where he hid his weapon?

Hand on heart AA, anyone who didn't have a giggle at that point needs to have a sense of humor inserted into the same place!

If I think that I've turned someone on and made them laugh at the same time, I'm very happy.

Thanks for the comment

EmAG

Does he survive?

I had a chill run down my spine with the wolves.

Hi Anonymous - does he survive?

I really don't know, it's completely up to the reader.

Though I have to say, it seems unlikely.

The wolves- yea it's kinda eerie isn't it?

That's actually a real memory.

Just before the turn of the centaury, (by which I mean 2000, I'm not THAT old!) I ended up lost in the Transylvanian mountains, in the dead of night, running out of gas and lost.

My mate and I got out of the car to listen for any signs of civilization, music, TV, that kind of thing.

What we got was the spooky, somehow ancient, sound of wild wolves, which really did seem to come from all around us, in the freezing, pitch darkness.

Him and me got back in that car pretty damn quick, I can tell you!

Thank you for commenting.

EmAG

Excellent story. You put all the pieces needed to create the perfect horror/revenge story and you did it very well. Nice cliff hanger ending which leaves it up to each reader to believe if he survived or not or was even possibly attacked by a werewolf which would be one hell of an ironic and cruel fate but that’s what makes these types of stories the fun that they are. Thanks for the great read and all you put into it.

J.D.

Hello JD,

I love the way you took my wolves and raised the 'stakes' to werewolves!

Well, why not, it is Xmas!

Thank you for commenting, I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

EmAG

5-Stars!

Hallo Emily!

Being a lesbian I have no compassion for men, so I was rooting for our beautiful sexy Vampyre to kill him very slowly as he is screaming in agony!... Oh my I get all wet and tingly just thinking about it,,, yes! :-)

About one of your favorite quotes, the Author is Vivian Greene: Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, its about learning how to dance in the rain.

It's one of my favorite quotes also..

Danke..

Hi GayKat,

Wow, kill him slowly while screaming in agony...you are a scary lady!

Guess he didn't survive the night in your imagination then, probably got ripped apart by JD's werewolves ^_^

Or maybe they chewed him up...slowly!

Thank you so much for telling me where that quote comes from, I love knowing that, I'll update my bio page at some point.

Maybe you will have fun with some of my other stories, although hand on heart you have to search pretty hard for lesbian scenes. Emily has quite a funny (her first) lesbian experience in Em & Mike 16, she gets caught in a plot of her own creating!

Thanks for getting in touch,

EmAG

Well done. Captivating. Arousing.

Hi Poissehomme,

^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for your comment.

EmAG

What was the name of the book with the cover that inspired you?

Hello ElenaM,

Great question. It was Last Kiss Goodnight, by Gena Showalter.

Nothing remotely like I had expected or imagined from the image that inspired me, but quite fun.

Sort of romance, creature, fantasy type story.

EmAG