All Comments on 'She Did'

Boom.

You need an editor. I like your stories but they are filled with so many distracting spelling, grammar, and diction problems it really detracts from your otherwise good stories. Get an editor. Your errors are obvious to any minimally literate person.

not enough crying, wailing, smoking craters, and blood running in the streets.

I'm assuming that Sherri and the ex-wife won't be teaching partners going forward...