All Comments on 'She Done Him In'

I really liked the premise of this one - I am a big fan of Shaw and despite his curmudgeonly protests, can't helping wanting to see Liza and Henry get happy together ;)

That said, there were elements of the execution that I had difficulty with. There were a number of places where the verb tense shifted - that was a little distracting. More, though, I felt that the elements of story and sex didn't quite sync. There was a disconnect as the story shifted gears from a focus on their relationship to a focus on sexuality - the style changed and became less focused on the style of the play and more attuned to a sort of more generic erotic fiction style. That was a shame, because I think that this piece had a lot going for it in its conception and basic idea.