by BigDaddyGreen
This story is amazing, please, PLEASE, write the next story on the events of the party and what happened to her. :3
A very unusual story, for a first story this was really well conceived.
I would've liked the wife to be blindfolded so she had no idea her husband was the visitor. Also it would have been nice for him to have been asked to stay and take a turn.
Nice story, a few tweaks I think you might have had a great one.
That was a story that made no sense at all and had nothing in it. Hate to trash someone’s first story but it was not a story at all. ????????? Cheers
I very much enjoyed this story! Well written and a fascinating situation and point of view. I would like to see more.