All Comments on 'She Needs More'

"That's when I shot them both your Honor."

1 star cuck shit.

Bestfriend needs really revenge let the husband take control of his friends life that's what should be next or something I pulled my 40 problem solved

Missing some adjectives and adverbs, but well done. It's too bad that there wasn't a microphone on for everyone to hear them.

You need to get an editor. I noticed loads of typos and that gets very distracting.

The devils in hell are probably already arguing with which sauce to cook your testicles and her tits. I wonder if they will agree on one dish or will it be two different culinary delights?

I stopped reading at: "To finally have my cock buried in my best friend's wife"...Best friend? Really? Does the writer know what a "best friend" really means? 1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)

Similar to what happened with my hub when approached at a party by a lady who was looking for a friend of hers. He ended up seeing her every week and sometimes more for 11 months! Pamela

Hopefully the story continues with slut destroying the “man she loves “ ?

... Would need enemies with friends like these?

Problem I had with this story...is...its too true and happens more often than anyone thinks!

Why I left the church and converted to another religion that would cut cheaters like these two, into ribbons!

He's not your best friend, or at least you're not HIS best friend!

Best friend, huh? slimy story of two worthless asses.

Miserable gutter slut, finds the perfect piece of shit to prove herself unworthy of any man.

A man truly, truly without honor, and she is equally as despicable. It's one thing to shove a knife in a person's back, but to do it to a friend is the stuff of craven betrayal. To do it to a spouse, is even worse.

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I don't fault OP for writing this story. After all, it's a part of life, as sordid is it is. That your writing evoked this type of deep, visceral, response is a testament to your writing skill and the impact of your story.

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Not my cuppa, but definitely well-written, especially the revelation at the end. 4/5.

Something was missing or something didn't fit. I think it was the setting where this sex took place. It just didn't feel erotic to me.

I wonder where you find best friends whore wife in the bible? This needs a second part, where the best friend needs a bone marrow transplant, only to find out his only match is the man who's wife he just fucked. After he finds out because the whore got pregnant. And there isn't another match....maybe he'll say bro's before hoe's or maybe his last fuck will be the whore as she nurses him in his dying hours. (1*)

Great first story. Short but to the point. The sexual tension could've been a bit more but the sex was raw and erotic. I look forward to more of your work

Just a sex story. No background or story here. He takes his friends now whore wife. She breaks her Marriage vows he is no better fucking his friends wife. Divorce is in the cards when they get caught or she gets pregnant. A short story going nowhere.

With you as a best friend who needs enemies? Terrible story

Another story about a whorewife and a false friend, with the vile addition of sex in a church. The Cuck Whisperer will do cartwheels over this one.

This is so hot I spontaneously combusted!

Sorry, this one didn't do it for me. 1*

Just another basement loser telling us his fantasies

I didn't read your story because I don't like sex stories in church setting

The sex scene is hot, no doubt. The story is awful.

Liked it. Well written and hot. Great to see another Aussie on here. 5*

Utterly worthless story on every level, not to mention horribly written.

Did you really think a new name would make your terrible writing style any better?

I'll go out on a limb here and guess that, again, you cant understand why people hate your stories, right? To you this seemed like you wrote "War and Peace", when in all actuality all you did was right "Horse and Shit".

Marriedaussie must have had some bad experiences at Church to make the worship services a place and time for the consummation of such an act of evil against a friend. I might add the pair of adulterers disrespectful act was also against every individual there who held the time of spiritual worship sacred. I am not speaking about the building, it is just a structure where the Church meets. Anyways, James is not a friend and Becky is not a faithful wife. It is a really depressing thought that these fictional characters are in reality clear reflections of actual people. People who, if the statistics are correct, are growing in numbers. Our self imposed social restraints are failing. Societies around the world are failing to maintain the self discipline once exhibited 50 years ago. Not that it will help any of us, but as Gandalf said, "Fly, you fools!" - TANSTAAFL

Two problems with this story. 1. You don't fuck a married women and 2. Never fuck a women in a church.

This was pretty damn hot!!

Some of the best sex I ever had was in a church. We had a local group that used a meeting room in in the church basement. I was charged with putting away the chairs after the meeting. As I was stacking them, one of the female attendees returned to get a sweater she had left. We started talking and before we knew it about twenty minutes had past and it was clear we both were flirting with each other. She stood and said she probably should be going, I stood to help her into her sweater. As she slid her arm into the sleeve she rubbed the front of my jeans. She turned to apologize and we stared into each other’s eyes. I leaned in to kiss her and the returned it aggressively. In a few minutes her jeans were pulled down and my dick was stroking into her from behind. We actually fucked three times. I think we didn’t leave there for another two hours. As she was leaving she said she better get home before her husband began to worry.

Looks like 26thNC is jealous of the dicking she got. Poor baby, you’ll get some cock soon, you always do,

Shit

Sick story. One Star.

Nice. Please continue.

Hot story

That this story rated so high is an indication of the kind of scum that read in this category. Sex in a church, can you idiots stoop any lower?

Anonymous bitch, your obsession with me and my comments is touching, but why don’t you find someone else to worship for a while? Imeasel is pretty cool, plus he shares your political views.

Just another heartless CUNT POS story! Nothing hot about this unless you are a CUNT or sissy coward and there are many here.

Lovely beginning.

Good story, and a nice touch to set it in a room with all their fellow churchgoers were sitting next door.

I LIKED IT...CINCO ESTRELLAS!

It is clear you're a natural. The only thing you can do wrong is go for long without writing more

Great story, and very well written. Hope to see another from you soon.

Fantastic story, Enjoyed your writing, Thanks for writing.

Very hot and sexy tale, love it!

Nice sexy story fast and to the point, sex……

You started off in past tense but then for some reason changed to present tense. But then you went back and forth between tenses.

You should have picked one and stuck with it.

Good story and would be interesting to see how things go after that night.

that was great, would love to see more. a lot more.