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don89048don89048about 3 years ago

You kept getting the names wrong! "Sylvia acts a bit uncomfortable as Sylvia gets naked" when it is Alicia who is taking off her clothes. There are a couple other times as well. I know it's hard to keep things straight when you are excited but,,, duh! Otherwise, a nice little story. Thanks for posting it.

morganj16morganj16about 3 years agoAuthor

Can't believe I did that.

Oh, really, I can. Since I totally expanded this story from the initial version. Makes me wonder how many other times I've done that without anyone saying anything.

Thanks for letting me know.

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