All Comments on 'She Wanted More Pt. 02: Another Fling'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Fantastic story. Great pacing. Holding on for the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I like the story and pacing, but don’t have a sense of closure for either parts 1 or 2, which sort of left me hanging. Why did Amy and Jerry seem to so easily dismiss her and then suddenly move without a goodbye? Why didn’t Trevor, who seems like a good guy, make an effort to track her down? I’m hoping part 3 will provide some answers.

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Thanks to all of you who have read and enjoyed my stories. I appreciate all of the comments, both good and the few not so good, and the high ratings. If you are new to my stories, it would probably be helpful to read them in the order they were written. The newer stories mi...

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