by Satsumabook123
Nice story. But the dialogue is so stilted. No one talks that way, and certainly not when they're having sex.
Wow, that was such a great story. I like how he drew her on by saying they should stop and pulling her to the next stage. The ending was surprising, I thought it would be about converting her to be a continuing sex slave or partner.
This was a good story. Keep up the good work. Him being careful and she being forward was a good decision