All Comments on 'She Wants Experience Before Wedding'

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nakedguyatxnakedguyatxover 1 year ago

Nice story. But the dialogue is so stilted. No one talks that way, and certainly not when they're having sex.

TomSavageIsFakeTomSavageIsFakeover 1 year ago

Wow, that was such a great story. I like how he drew her on by saying they should stop and pulling her to the next stage. The ending was surprising, I thought it would be about converting her to be a continuing sex slave or partner.

SonatatreSonatatreover 1 year ago

This was a good story. Keep up the good work. Him being careful and she being forward was a good decision

Bargyn1Bargyn1over 1 year ago

Good read, a bit stiff!

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I am a very amateur writer. For a couple of years I wrote lots of stories just for fun, not showing them to anyone else. While I do make every effort the stories will contain many errors as I am dyslexic.The stories will never win any awards but I hope that many of them will b...