All Comments on 'She Wants the Job'

I would love to hear what you think of the story. This was my first attempt at a BDSM story.

I do not like to read stories in third person, idea was fine. She needs to be a participant not just being observed.

The story is good with some nice ideas although at the beginning when you begin to voice Kevin's thoughts you never really give any indication that he is in to bondage, your descriptions of how Madison is positioned can be confusing and you keep changing tense from past to present for example you use words like began in one paragraph but then you use begins, this may be intentional but it is disconcerting, apart from that, good start just a few hints for anything else you do

Loved reading this story!

Can't wait to read more like this

It might just be me, but given that she is, as you've stated, very gifted in every job shes taken on... I am sort of curious why it is she keeps needing to find jobs.

I'll admit to skimming, looking for plot oriented details, and not the fluff, I sort of saw the opening as more fluff to describe why she was so good at her job, talented, etc.

I have done things to get a job that I thought, at first, I would never do just to get a job. But I discovered I rather enjoyed...Even when the interviewer was considerably older and married.