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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Thank you

I look forward to these stories. Could this be possible in the future?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Tick tock

The chapters are being spaced out so far..why? One has to read at least the last, and often the second last chapter to pick up the thread of events before things are making sense again. Either put your best effort and energy in or just let this story peter out into oblivion. It reminds me of the ancient American 'Dallas' series/sitcom decades ago, in fact circling the drain.

AWAKADSAWAKADSalmost 5 years ago
true @anon "Tick tock"

The last number of submissions are spaced at intervals of two months.

Either the author has lost interest, or life just got in the way? Surely a single (or two) page chapter submission should take less than 1400 hours to complete?

On the other hand, the saying "Life is a lady dog, and then you die", is an universal truth. Get into it Pars001, this one is too intriguing to fade away prematurely.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyalmost 5 years ago
Improving

Maybe it's that less is happening, but the storytelling is a lot less jumpy and eratic than before. Most things are getting some explanation.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Looking forward to the next chapter.

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