All Comments on 'Shelly's Disbelief'

You really should write another story. Sexy and funny all at the same time.wmnfx

This was my first submission; dipping my toe in, testing the waters. Writing is very much like sex, in a way. You leave yourself very vulnerable and open to potential criticisms. But so far so good, and now that I’ve lost my literary virginity I’ll definitely be back.

I hope you intend to write more. Your writing style is very good and the story was magnificent. Please keep writing!

Glad you stopped writing. Trying to come across as the perfect guy then loving other guys cum. Blech

Great story, different kind of plot but very hot stuff!