All Comments on 'Shelly's New Dance'

by eagelwolf

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
....SHELLY IS SO HOT & INSATIABLE & WANTS MORE $ SEX NOW !!!

...Good writing developing Shelly's love for lots of sex, so now write stories about Shelly's big $$$$ job as the Waikiki beach bar's erotic F*** masseuse for the African obese nudist swingers resort..Shelly is popular & averages 20 half hour "sessions" per day & she is live on the internet 24/7..Shelly loves to mount the huge horse-size hung Nigerian basketball players..the resort has to build bleachers for the loud drunk audiences..what fun ..Looking forward to a Shelly hot humping "massage" series ...Thanks ,,,,,,::::::,,,,,,,::::::,,,,,,,:::::::,,,,,,,,,,

eagelwolfeagelwolfalmost 13 years agoAuthor
To anonymous

Um...hey, I'm glad you like it...I think?

To everyone else. Sorry for the big typo in the introduction. The word resentfully should be recently. That's what I get for drinking and posting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Refreshingly believable characters

Shelly and Minnie were a lot of fun, the situation interesting and hot. I'd like to read more about these two.

JackalopesJackalopesalmost 13 years ago
WOO HOO!

Very hot! Very sexy! I loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
VERY NICE

Hawaii is an expensive city to attend college in.

eagelwolfeagelwolfover 10 years agoAuthor
To very nice

I know, I went there. I'm a local but it still put me in serious debt. In the real world, Shelly and Minnie would have had to shake it every night to make ends meet.

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