All Comments on 'Shepherd Market'

This is part of series of stories the most important of which is the Girl with the Pukashell bikini which i cant

Provide here. You can find that key chapter on Amazon Kindle ebook under the title My Life With May. You can read it for free with kindle unlimited. Michael

Shepherd's Market hasn't been like that for decades and the idea that anyone would pay ₤10,000 for sex with a London whore is ridiculous. You also know nothing about Japanese women. Far from having no sexual inhibitions, 99% are very conservative about sexual matters.

Your style of writing is boring. The characters have no character. Develop them more rather than giving pointless detail about London transport options. It seems you are more interested in that than anything erotic.

So yes the story is set in the 90s and the author lived 10 years in Japan. Everything else criticism accepted so thank you.