All Comments on 'Sheriff's New Girl Dominated'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
great start

What a great start...a weak woman being manhandled by a dominate, animal like male....excellent scenario with a small town thug becoming the sheriff and lording it over the weakest of the weak, while the others look on and don't care since it doesn't touch them. Great character development and good scenarios thus far. Just don't fall prey to the most common writer problem...too much time between installments!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
AMAZING!!!

please post more!! this is incredible. your imagery and dialogue is perfect. keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Great when do we get the next installment

Great ready for the next chapter

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