by Surrendering
What a great start...a weak woman being manhandled by a dominate, animal like male....excellent scenario with a small town thug becoming the sheriff and lording it over the weakest of the weak, while the others look on and don't care since it doesn't touch them. Great character development and good scenarios thus far. Just don't fall prey to the most common writer problem...too much time between installments!!!
please post more!! this is incredible. your imagery and dialogue is perfect. keep going!
Great ready for the next chapter