All Comments on 'She's A Bitch'

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betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 11 years ago
What?

Confusing tale. Only one thing is for sure. The husband is a cheating fucking asshole.

I hate cheaters.

JackorChuckJackorChuckalmost 11 years ago
Cheaters

Be they man or women cheaters are the lowest form of life.

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333almost 11 years ago
Humorous?

I can't find cheating on his wife as funny as you intend it to be. But I guess it is better than the alternative: rape.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
No means no, not try harder.

Belongs in either non con or non erotic.

BTTapBTTapalmost 11 years ago
Clever

Clever and funny. Sharply delivered. Nice twist. 5 stars.

cantbuymycantbuymyalmost 11 years ago

just a note - it is feil not fell. and i was laughing my ass off.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

A clever twist to end the story, good read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
My 2 Cents

The poem was the best part of this tale. Yes the twist at the end was clever but not worth the effort. The wife is as dumb as a post for "forcing" her husband to rape Wendy. The husband was a cheat! Where are all you cheat haters? If he has been banging her for some time he may also be guilty of statutory rape. Still think it was a fun read?

KamattlockKamattlockalmost 11 years ago
Interesting Read

I think if Penny really wanted to punish Wendy it would have went even better if she sat on her face and made Wendy eat her pussy while her husband fucked Wendy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Doctor Fell

Actually, cantbuymy, it IS Dr FELL.

rjordanrjordanalmost 11 years ago
Love your stuff

Perfect SHORT but complete stories for an afternoon break.

LickideesplitLickideesplitalmost 11 years ago
@Anon - 2 cents

Babysitter is described as 19 years old. They would have had 1 to almost 2 years under LIT's age criterion.

Hubby would have been better advised to wait for the USUAL 'slap & tickle' session! Sweetie will calm down sometime, and Hubby will be maligned for following wrongful 'orders!' For those who argue that logic prohibits Sweetie from criticizing Hubby, the first rule is 'vaginas trump logic!'

Good little twist at the end, but it was frequently foreshadowed during the coitus!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Hot *****

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