All Comments on 'She's In Charge'

I just don't understand people taking the time to write such trash with the sole purpose of pissing people off. They are trolls themselves. It's like eating their young.

Written by a certified fool author.

Possibly the worst opening paragraph ever.Tbis is not erotic in any way.Quit writing

And while there was a woman involved, there was no love. And while I can suspend disbelief, I have a hard time comprehending how a person can party all night, fuck all morning and come home at 6 am to insult the man she "loves". You try staying up 24 hours straight and see how coherent you are.

Crikey, It started off like Le Mans, and kept up the pace all the way through.

No reason 'Why' he and she are like this, how it evolved, and as usual it finished with " I am so happy in this lifestyle"

Where is the prelude, the plot development, and how about some character development,

On the story-line, lacking is his self-respect. His wife might be playing around, but he should still have his self respect.

Thanks for your efforts, though, score of two is my mark.

Kilroy

sounds like fun if your a cuckold or want to-be, like ME

See above.

Please write more. You posted it in the correct category. Ignore the insecure little pussies who are scared of their own sexuality; that is the only thing that could draw such vitriol for a story they read willingly. Some people are very strange indeed.

Poorly written and crap story line. Lousy character development. In short just plain bad. 1*

Right. THEY comment on the story while almost all of your comments are slamming them for daring to have a different opinion, but THEY'RE the ones who are insecure little pussies. This is almost a text book reaction from, as you put it, an insecure little pussy.

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As for the "read willingly" part, there's a very simple concept that trumps this: ya gotta read a story to know what's in it. If we can tell what was in this story without reading it, that's solid evidence it deserved to the slammed.

Stupid and crude.I only read the first few lines.A worthless story.

what bunch of bullshit you are annony

stay with your regular job you can not write worth a shit

Gave it a 1 not because of offsetting somebody, but what it deserved.

If you read the whole thing, you are a little punk.

Great story. Hot.

Look a story is just that a story. Has a beginning, middle, end. There is a reason why the hubby is a cuckold and the hot wife fucks lovers. Hubby is either forced to be a bi sex lover or he is a willing sex lover. Rules are made for a reason and both hubby and wife have to agree. Think it through start to end. Make an outline, then try to write it.

Bi? The husband was totally gay!!! Wrong category...1*

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This is what I desire on my wedding night -- my wife's vagina filled, pumped full of another man's sperm.

When Cat got home from her "date" she found her things on the front porch, inside trash bags and the locks changed. Once she demeans, degrades and humiliates him, he realizes she has no love or respect for him and their marriage is over. Even for a fictional story, this was just stupid.

Enjoyed the story.

But, more perversely, I'm actually getting off to all the harsh comments people are leaving for stories like this. Imagine the conflict and denial raging in these people that compels them to such raw hatred for what is, in truth, a MADE UP story.

Well, I guess we all have our own ways of working through our issues...

Anyone of you are more than welcome to pm me if you feel the need to vent more spleen over this matter.

Its one thing to want to watch your wife with another man. But when she starts insulting her husband - demeaning, degrading and humiliating him, it's time to pull the plug. She's about to risk her health from every disease known to man. Why would her husband do anything but throw her ass out and divorce her? Ugly story of abuse.

1 star

Whorewife cucks her idiot husband. What a novel concept for a loving wives story.

As always, a slut married to a gay guy.

Yawn...

Must be great to be married to a woman who doesnt love him and for her to be married to man who prefers men. He'd be better off to stop putting on an act and come out, nothing wrong with being gay, just let him have enough self respect to be honest about it

In other words a cheap slut cheats, ends her marriage and gets a divorce.

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