by SebastianTheCrab
I'm still having trouble getting past the step-sibling thing. "Oh no, we might have to move if someone finds out about this totally legal thing we are doing!" It barely even qualifies as taboo.
Story would have worked much better if we found out they were half brother and half sisters.
What the girls Mom was doing was illegal, but not even society would frown on what they were doing. No need for secrecy AT ALL!
Huh, why didn't Heather want a thumb in her ass? She does it enough to him. >.>