by honeywldcat
I love the continuation of Kates story. I love how Clint loves kids and seam to relate to Sean. I think he is portraid as to much of an ass sometimes but thats just me.
continue continue pleaseee.... i want to read more. :)
i get the feeling that this is one hell of a roller coaster a coming up, and im aon for the ride, keep it up you already have two good main characters and the uncle and the workers all sound like they are going to be fun keep it coming
sensitive alpha male. I like how the story is going. I hope you take your time and really flesh out the characters. No need to rush through the story. Detail and a slow and steady pace are good. Looking forward to chapter 3.
You write about these folks as if you knew them; keep up the great work!
You do not need to spend that much for a dictionary, but buy one and see the difference between throes and throws. You wanted throes not throws. Also, did you want 'here' in the line "...kissing here forever..." or did you want 'her'?
Even with thoseerrors I enjoyed the story and gave it a 5.
Love your story characters. Every one deserve a second chance at love, same for Clint & Cat!
Keep up your good work!