by honeywldcat
Then neither of you would have had to go through the week from hell.
Great chapter, can't wait for the finish
you right amazingly well. I love how well you develop your characters, please keep writing
But, ......a little romance, a little less force and a bit more tenderness might go a long ways to making him a bit more human and less of a jerk.
Excited for the next part of the story! Hopefully sooner rather than later.
I just read all the available chapters. Too much ego, too much blazing passion and too little communication between these two. I can't see people like these two ever getting along for very long, because it is all reaction and no thought about asking a few reasonable questions. Just get mad and start throwing things at each other. Of course the making up is great, but not a stable relationship based on what you have written.
I know others will disagree, but this is my take thus far.
i am excited to read the next chapter but at the same time sad to see it end! i have loved the story from chapter one and i think they are perfect for each other! please if they get engaged please tell us about the wedding and the honeymoon hehehe
So mean! Hope the next chapter arrives soon!
ooh yay! just when i thought there wouldn't be a new chapter for a while, it magically appears. i hate that the chapter ends this way, i want more! i love the way he claims her. it's so sexy/hot :) can't wait to read the last chapter but sad to see this love end. great job!
SO excited to have read the latest installment, and I hate how well you just redefined the cliffhanger concept. Can't wait for the last chapter!
Why it is so easy to mess up & so hard to make up? Love the way you write and how the story is unfolding! You are great writer.