All Comments on 'She's the Boss Ch. 03'

by Thalaxian

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Looking forward to the next chapter. Both women are really interesting and attractive people the way you described them. (But Maddie’s hotter)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Such an amazing and well written story. I’m really enjoying this and look forward to seeing more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

You manage to create that air of mystery, the lack of being sure if a win is truly a win or did I lose even more without realizing it which reminds me of the old twilight zone stories I would watch on reruns. Not exactly an easy task but you appear to have a natural talent to bring it out in your stories. You also have a way of leaving the reader unsure of which character’s are on which side and that is simply maddening since I end up considering everyone as a traitor or spy. Well done once again.

J.D.

ThalaxianThalaxianalmost 2 years agoAuthor

@Anon/J.D. Thank you very much for the kind words, much appreciated! I may be writing smut but I do like to put the effort in, and I'm glad you find it so enjoyable! Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is THE BEST story I have ever read on Literotica. I really do Mean it. The details, the tension in the air, and Irina as even a ficitional character is one of the hottest,smartest, provocative and most SEDUCTIVE women to ever exist. Im in love with this story and the author (I love The New Girl stories too)

HreulfgarHreulfgaralmost 2 years ago

You are really pouring out the stories and I am loving it. This is definitely my favorite however.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Dude! Its awesome!

We need moar! :)

dressingSaradressingSaraalmost 2 years ago

My biggest compliments!

This story is fantastic. I love your characters and the whole setting. It´s all s hot and just makes me want more every single time.

The sxe scenes are incredibly hot and steamy, but the almost biggest perk of the story is, how extremly well written and easy to read it is.

Bravo, please keep up the great work. Can´t wait for more

ThalaxianThalaxianalmost 2 years agoAuthor

@dressingSara Cheers pal, much appreciated! I very much enjoy writing (and writing it) and I take pride in my prose! More will of course arrive, in good time! Have a great day

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is really good I hope you continue it ASAP

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
Just wow

This is by far one of the best I have read on here, keep up the good work. I can’t wait for more, I hope there is more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Pleasee upload chapter 4. I literally cannot wait

ThalaxianThalaxianalmost 2 years agoAuthor

@Anon Hey brother, my Patrons have chosen Irina as the next story, so there'll be a chapter release on the 1st (uploaded here then, likely a Sunday release.) I look forward to writing it! Have a great day xoxox

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

This is an amazing series. All three chapters are incredibly exciting. At times while reading it, I had to stop and calm down for a while before I could continue. I think we’re all ready for the next part!

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Writer. Bisexual. Pervert. Lover of all things fantastical. I write a lot of futa stuff, some gay stuff, a bit of straight stuff. I will publish some stories (in full) here, and in time look into selling some things, to supplement my (real) writing work. Please check out my ...

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