by Thalaxian
I love the stories so far, I wish there was more resistance from the guy, something unexpected to make the story more thrilling to read rather than a generic story of a futunari over powering a guy, that's predictable. The tension and fighting makes the story different and exciting to read.
Having been where Theo is at to an extent, I can relate, and this story definitely resonates with me.
I didn't care for this one. Not sure if I'll read anymore. I think Irina is just getting too hateful for me.
I dont often leaves comments but i have to agree with some others this was probably one of my favorite most waited for series until mads betrayal, it just doesn't feel right without some kind of comeuppance for her theo may be losing a battle against his own willpower but hes not a wet flannel
I wish Irina had gotten/would get Theo pregnant instead of Maddie. Mpreg is underused in these sorts of stories and him trying to explain it to his co-workers would be really hot
@VaginaPeople You make a semi-good point. I didn't reference her vagina, but she has one - she's had one since the start, it's referenced at the start, it's just not referenced here. This is clearly an act of degradation - washing her body - and Irina does not make a habit of using her womanly parts casually. @UnhappyPeople This is not a nice story. The point is that Theo caves. If you don't enjoy it, that's okay! But I'm sorry, this will not have a happy ending unless you consider Theo becoming Irina's bitch-boy a happy ending. If you want retribution, or revenge, or an escape, then find it elsewhere.
The psychological manipulation on display here is so incredibly sexy. Irina is a domme goddess and Theo is the luckiest sub in the world. Please continue this amazing writing and fuck all the haters who (for some strange reason) continue to read this story they claim to dislike.
@Anon Thanks man, I was never going to stop it anyway - not until it's finished! - but I appreciate the kind words all the same! It's not for everyone - none of my stories are - but as a writer, I like variety, and exploring dark and light is important. Cheers
To end this properly, I think Irina should let herself be impregnated by Theo.
I can't get over the fact that Irina didn't beat Theo fair and square. I don't care Maddie cheated or not. But when Irina cheated the bet, her dominance over Theo drops in my opinion cuz only who doesn't have enough confidence that they can win will try to cheat. Domme without confidence is not sexy at all. And worse she is cheating at her own game what is the point.
@Anons New Chapter should be out on the weekend of the 15th, my ability to write willing. Other anon: I think that's a fair take but it's not how I see it. She didn't make Maddie cheat, Maddie chose to. She won, fair and square, because Mads chose a future with Irina, set in stone, over one that wasn't. I don't view Irina as someone who, when victory is sat on her lap, will chose to reject it to "prove" something, when she's getting what she wants. You're welcome to disagree, but I think you've decided that Irina made Maddie do something, when all Mads did was go behind Theo's back and decide to let Irina win.
Have you dropped this or planning to continue eventually ? It's my fav hope you continue it
Maddie isn't honorable she went back on her deal with Theo and condemned him if it was just her that would be ok
If I was Theo I'd give her the cold shoulder even if he submits to Irina and that's the way this story is going like every other dominant Futa story's
For once I'd like to read a story where the male told the Futa to stick it or just left or even topped themselves to shame the Futa for causing there death by there actions but that's extreme
I'm still enjoying the story even if it's got a predictable ending
@Ozeminotaur last chapter I imagined Theo walking away while Irina was fucking Maddie and coming back and stabbing her to death and keep up with his free life afterwards
Lol so easy to find so many ways Theo is superior to Irina, the farther we get into the story the more I find Theo kinda deserves this. I mean, he's even said it himself, there's been SO many points where any other person would've/could've stopped the whole thing. And there is still so much he could do now to stop it, but he just... doesn't.
Always find the character that "can't resist" their sexual desire for someone to be some of the most pathetic. Like jesus dude, so what if she's insanely hot? Just don't fuck her, it's not hard to have the barest modicum of self control