All Comments on 'Shhhh, Mommy Will Hear You'

I like where this is going. I'd love to be the dad here. Anyway, continue with the story, it could get pretty wild with the three of them.

Really well done story. It absolutel deserves the novel that it just gave birth to :) Please, keep it going - can't wait to read more

Thanks for giving it to us

not sure what the fuss is about, it's pretty boring to me. too drawn out for without any real relevant connection to the story.

that shit just makes me feel sorry for the 18 year old virgin girl, then she wants her dad to make her pussy feel good and her and the mom are in on it together? that is just fucked up

they should have moved, i would have never moved anywhere anyways without asking my children what they thought or if that was alright with them. to rob them of a social life is just plain wrong

Just go with the flow, great story. Him having a baby with the daughter is great especially as a suggestion from the mother. Tell those other fools to flake off, your story is awesome.

Slow to start, and I almost stopped reading, but in the end I came twice reading this. Please get her prego!

BTW, she isn't 11, she's 18. Did you read the entire story?

John should get Lexi pregnant right away & keep her that way. Lexi should be giving brith to a new baby every 9.5-10 months, until menopause kicks in.

This is a well written story. It builds slowly and it combines lust and love. As for the previous unappreciative comments: this is fiction, so there is no need to feel sorry for an 11 year old girl being uprooted. Almost all moral codes condemn incest, regardless of the age of the participants, so isn't is peculiar that other readers are perusing incest stories and then becoming indignant because they mistakenly believe that the younger participant is only 11 years old? Obviously, they did not read the story very closely.

I appreciate your comments, both in favor and opposed. This story was meant to be a story about human struggle between what we know is moral and ethical, and other human natural instincts. Parents often do what they believe is in the best interest of their children, "The road to hell is paved with good intentions." Stay tuned for the next installment

i love were this story is headed. i kind of new it would lead into all this but it was a nice slow start. understanding if people would read she is 18 whenshe has sex not 11. she is bevoming a woman and learning things about life. she askes a lot of question with her mom. very nice story cant wait to read more.

Hot dripping sex. The story is good too:)

i would love to see a follow up with the daughter pregnant.

I just hope that things don't get ugly and jealous or whatever,

Wonderful writing and a special story line.