All Comments on 'Shifting Dynamics'

Girl, you are so talented. Thanks for sharing. ;) - Emily

What an awesome read. I am truly impressed by both structure and the way it brings out emotions in ones self

Lovely story,a little bit sad, but very romantic

Amazing job building the setting and making the characters come alive in such a short story. I was sucked right in from the beginning and feel invested in the couple. Would love to read where they go next.

Loved it! Beautifully written, very sexy and got me in the feels.

Excellent work!

-Bodhi

Thanks for writing and sharing your talent my friend. I give five Stars but somehow this site gave a one and will not let me change it. A little help here!! I applaud you. I was turned on and reminded of some things in my own dynamics.

Master Xander0284

Loved it! Really enjoyed it

Way to draw your audience, great work!!

This was well written and engaging. I can't wait to read more.

--Sensualgirl38

Loved this story. I could see the characters and the pacing made the story flow. Very hot

I wish I would have found this during contest season.

The story makes you wonder? The turkey sandwiches were a nice seasonal addition.

I loved this story. It hit all the right places and had me wishing I could get the same gift next Christmas.

You’ve written a story in which the sex is a natural part, not stuck in just to have some sex, and not sex around which is written a story. It all came across as very natural although there are some unanswered questions not least why is this story in bdsm? But the important thing is I liked it and it deserves five stars.

... to the party having just found you.

A great short story for Xmas 2019 showing quite a detailed and varied knowledge.

My reservations are, firstly, it's too short and could easily be made into 4 pages which I believe is a far more suitable length. And secondly, obviously this was written before "A Nice Mug Of Tea" but both females use the same position for sex whereas I'm sure you could write of others. However, both srvations are quite minor and you definitely have the quality to rectify these. For example, they are set in vastly different geographical locations although surprisingly, so far, both lead males are medical doctors.

Why is it in bdsm? I think erotic ouplings would be a better choice.

Still worthy of 5 stars. Please keep on writing; It's a damned sight easier to comment / criticise than to write in the first instance and i still loved it.

I read ` the day it Snowed in Nam`, and this story was mentioned, so of course I had to read this after that. But now I'm Snowed. What happened to Triggers' Captains wife, Kelly "TC", that she now lives in that shithole trying to save money to move back home? Where is that story, and the rest of this story? And there's really no BDSM so why put your story there? This should be in "Loving Wives", because it sounds like they have been fucking each other for a long while. Maybe a chronology of your stories is needed for old dumb Marines like me. Sorry I have to score this at 4 stars.