All Comments on 'Shifting Fortunes Ch. 01'

Excellent beginning!!!

That was a great start, I'm hooked. Please keep writing.

This is a great story and I think you have something here :)

Please continue to write another chapter soon!!!! :) If you could make it a bit longer that would be great!!!!! :)

good beginning... continue on

story ever on Lit and you are off to a great start. I like that you have a couple of things going on. That Sam has escaped from someone who may be right now chasing after her and who is this new guy? What role is this inexperience young shifter going to play? Again, great start. Please continue!

Thanks for all your encouraging comments. I have already submitted Chapter 2 for approval, hopefully it shows up soon. I will try and make the next chapter longer, thanks for pointing that out, I was unsure about the length. The next chapter is just a little more explaining the characters and establishing a base to work from. Please comment as I can learn from your critiques! Thanks :o)

This is a well written begining to an interesting story. Can't wait for more!

Please don't wait long to continue this story it is very interesting.

This has the makings of a very good story. Nice way to start out. Lots of questions. I will definitely be coming back to read the answers.

what a nice first chapter. so many intriguing things to tell and explain. hope 2 gets approved soon :)

I will be watching for more...:)

Looking forward to more.

Nice and very good introduction. It is compact into the pages and fulfill the needs of the readers to learn what they are readings but still give a lot of promises in the next chapters. Cant wait for the next ones.

Amazing and so sad, glad to see you've written more chapters.

You're a very talented writer. :)