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ReefBeachalmost 9 years agoGood story, well-written
Great twists & turns, good descriptions, good humour (definitely should've thought of the Yankees' losing games).
A sad, beautiful ending, unlike most of the stories round here. Maybe a little more about the mother's grief to heighten the pathos.
Very concise & very moving. Well done!
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