by VMKane
Find another way topass your time in the old folks home.
5* You have captured the characters very well. A bit hard to follow at times but not easy to capture emotions and thoughts in stressful situations.
This is not an easy story to read, nor does if offer much for those looking for instant relief, but that should not detract from the very real quality here. If you're prepared to make the effort, to really read, not just skim, this is one of the best stories from one of the best authors.
Bravo
This was a difficult story to read, but the subject needed to be that way.
Well done
VMKane, I want to complement you on the quality of your writing style.
And, the psychological power of your imagination. I look forward to your future postings on this site.
If you have any other published works available elsewhere, please email me that information.
Thank you - fanfare
I am deeply impressed. Originally I was looking for a sweet simple romance story and then... I was gifted with a truly beautiful story. You have a talent. I can't wait to read more of your work.
<3 all the way from Germany
This story moved me to tears. Every word is so raw, yet so right, and all of the emotion comes through clearly.
I really loved this story. It was happy and sad at the same time. For some reason it touched me deeply. My thanks. :)
I found this story interesting, the standard lesbian story I was expecting took a dark turn! I read it all the way through and got another surprise at the end with the obituary for Kat. Not the usual story at all. But I liked it.
It's hard to find a balance between beautiful, fucked up, and hot. You've done that here, and I thank you for the privilege of reading it.