by FairiesMermaids
A sequel is coming! It is called Indulgence on Mermaid Isle... Part 1 is almost done.
COMING SOON.
Hi Anonymous, It's a multi-chapter story. I have plans for 14 chapters so far. Enjoy!
If it is a multi-part story, you don't have to put the end after each chapter. This confuses the reader. The end is THE END.
The story is definitely not over! I have written the first 3 stories and have started working on the fourth. I have plans for at least 15 stories. I hope you enjoy the Sailor's journey...
Thanks for the feedback! I am a very descriptive writer, but I understand what you mean. The point behind the "overwriting" is that this is a story set in an outlandish, fantasy world; if I was writing about a man in 2018 having sex with multiple female partners, the style would be different.
This is a tale of a simple sailor who has limited sexual experience surviving a shipwreck, being rescued by mermaids and becoming their sexual plaything; it's an over the top and outlandish fantasy. I hope you enjoy!!
Hi. Just my opinion, overwritten with the extended description getting in the way of everything else. Take a look at the style of story below. It's sparse yet intense. "[The] God of Mischief and Lies" - Loki finds something he can't control. https://www.literotica.com/s/god-of-mischief-and-lies
Best of luck...
Wow! Thanks for reading. I have written most of the first 3 stories and have plans for 15 stories so far... I've never written such a large story, so I'm not sure how long it will take to tell the whole tale. I'm so glad you enjoyed!