All Comments on 'Shipwrecked'

Loved it. Amazing, beautiful. Inspired me to write my own story. *sighs happily*

Editing note: "Site" = a location; "sight" = visual, something you see, as in "He took in the beautiful sight of her naked body." "Waste" = garbage, something to be thrown away; while "waist" = the area between a person's hips and rib cage. Other than that, I didn't see many typos. Your writing style is nice and has a good flow and pace. <br><br>

The only thing that was a little off was her easy acceptance and trust of her rescuer, after having been in an abusive relationship. In real life, I'd shake my head at her for not learning a lesson from her prior relationship. In the story however, we as readers know he can be trusted.

Loved it so sweet ,sensual and vulnerable at the same time .

You need to learn the difference between "site" and "sight" among others .... Homonyms seem to be your bugaboo!