All Comments on 'Shobha' Affair'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Shobha_Shabhy_Shabby_Sh-t?

It's all in the spelling. Don't give up your day job

ALFfromMelmacALFfromMelmacabout 6 years ago
I thought the story was great ...

There were a few grammar issues that were distractions, but not enough to deter me from finishing and enjoying the story! Looking forward to chapter 2!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Incest/Taboo

Guess I missed where this was incest or taboo.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very bad

Bad,bad,bad,bad... Stop writing, you are a pathetic author. This isn't Taboo or Incest so you must also be a moron.

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