All Comments on 'ShocK & Awe'

Love that twist ending! Jake is something else XD

Nice story, but she doesn't know what her boyfriend sounds and feels like? I feel this needs a bit more work.

I hate when these end with the boyfriend as the rapist. It's both predictable and unbelievable and ruins the story.

An update from my original (though it was updated a little too, I'd love to hear thoughts on changes. Hopefully shows growth & more style.