All Comments on 'Sholan Alliance - AU Bk 04 Ch. 03'

I just encountered your first three of this series a week or so ago. When I found your latest today I am ecstatic. Please keep it going !!! Thank you

Thanks and I've been enjoying writing this series. If you check my profile it will connect you to another site where I have far more stories. I've moved beyond the erotic aspect and a number of the stories just don't belong on this site. Again, I'm glad you are enjoying this series. You might also enjoy the series I based this on. It is the Sholan Alliance by Lisanne Norman

I love this story, and I have been hoping you hadn't abandoned it, but now I find you posted a new chapter 2 weeks ago and I missed it because you did not keep the tags consistent: for a while you switched to "alien females", now you have gone back to "alien felines" (which makes better sense, actually), and it confused the issue a little, plus you changed from "leska links" to "mental links". I found it though, so no harm done.

That scene with Crystal's mother was great, I've had run-ins with several "churchy types" like her that are so narrow-minded a fly can speck in both of their eyes at once. Unfortunately there are a lot of them out there and they often vote, if you get my drift...