All Comments on 'Shooting Blanks Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Mark?

Better take another edit thru here, you change names in the middle...

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 9 years ago
Wait. Who's fucking whom?

And if Jen was already pregnant, how was she going to convince Dave it was his? This story made ZERO fucking sense.

KrosisKrosisover 9 years agoAuthor
Whoops!

Thanks for noticing! I've fixed the names. Funny, the story's been on 2 other sites for years and no one brought it to my attention before!

Rojj1Rojj1over 7 years ago
To Whackdoodle - Who is Fucking Whom?

You ask - And if Jen was already pregnant, how was she going to convince Dave it was his? This story made ZERO fucking sense. Actually it does, as you will see when you read part 1 !!!

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