All Comments on 'Shopping Day'

by mauvaize

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
is this necessary??

In my opinion this was way over the top and was not even close to being erotic as it was being unhumane. Physical abuse should never condoned. Nowhere in this story did the female gain any pleasure from the beating she recieved. But I guess it takes a BIG man to adminsiter PAIN to a smaller defenseless person. I had always wondered what became of the playground bullys who took advantage of samller kids. And I wonder if the Stockholm syndrome is what keeps people in these types of relationships, or is it the threat of even more severe beatings? Oh, and by the way, this is the first story I have felt compelled to complain about.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Truely enjoyed this story

Oh what subby hasnt been in a simular situation!

Well written story that could very well not be fiction but reality for some of us.

Thanks for writting it.

silent

ronia5lmfronia5lmfover 11 years ago
enjoyed

I enjoyed your story - don't mind people who comment about it being inhuman. They just don't understand.

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