All Comments on 'Shopping Day'

What was the point of all that farting? Does anyone really find that shit hot?

That was Really good but extremely raw and emotional!! You summarized it well when you wrote "rules are for the comfortable". Not really a Hot or Sexy story, but oddly erotic in a way that appealed to my most basic desires... You are a good writer and i'd like to read more of your stuff! 5- Stars for your first submittal!

I don't think it was supposed to be erotic in this one so much as showing they could be silly and comfortable with each other. There's a whole "couples that fart together stay together" thing. I think the first time though they were just being drunk idiots.

Very well written story that shows the lives of the unhoused and poor in a very raw light.

The story was alright but a little confusing and the you stopped you need to finish this too find out what happens I only gave it a 4 please continue

I hope you continue the story... Maybe somehow their lives get a bit better. A small apartment, a decent job, maybe std free and bit healthier life?

Sad but sexy and loving 🤗