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I loved the story and the content and ideas, but there were a few typos that need to be corrected. It takes a little away when it says one thing, but should be another and you need to stop and go back to continue the train of thought

Oh yes--It's the dressing room story. It shows up every other day.

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Loved it, you have a wonderful imagination, like all your work.

Jobeth

great story kaz, i wish my shopping trips where like that !!