All Comments on 'Shopping with Suzi Ch. 01'

Relax. It's a toy he can remove at any time without the key. Dummy

Good start if a little short keep going sweetheart

Great start, but she should be a little more forceful with the cage. Should have let him gain her trust first, but whatever, hot story nonetheless, please continue with this!

I think it's an excellent start - especially for a first time - look forward to

reading more of your story!

Great start to see how this unfolds. Please chapter two.