All Comments on 'Short Story 01: Gina'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

An intriguing story, please continue.

oldsage_1oldsage_1about 2 years ago

More please. If you have the story and want to tell it I want to read it.

Cheers

SAGE

bigbob2406bigbob2406about 2 years ago

Beautiful story. Its got legs.... let it run where it will. Looking forward to seeing more. Thank you.

BramblePestBramblePestabout 2 years ago

I do think it deserve a follow-up, i quite enjoyed reading the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very nice sexy story! Give sexy Ellis a bit of chest hair that Gina can explore as she opens his shirt, then caresses and kisses his chest. Very sexy!

cvandrewscvandrewsabout 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks to all of you who've indicated you'd like to see more of this story. I'll do my best! cva

stewartbstewartbabout 2 years ago

Great premise ... love the characters ... would love to have further adventures ... PLEASE!! Oh here's 5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is a well-told story and the characters deserve to live on. Please continue it.

Qwer12Qwer12about 2 years ago
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More more more. Enjoyed so please add more adventures.

th0ts0vuth0ts0vuabout 2 years ago

Thank you. I really enjoyed this. They deserve more and there are a few ways this could go. I’m looking forward to it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please continue.

tim0277tim0277about 2 years ago

Please continue. Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

More, please

Jerryr6Jerryr6about 2 years ago

Very well written. Five Stars!

lerenardruselerenardruse7 months ago

There must be a second chapter. This was an intro to the story.

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