All Comments on 'Show and Tell'

Great story and so well written.

Excellent story, I enjoyed it a lot, especially some of the dirty detail that referred to how wet Rachel got. Good writing style, thank you.

The story could have used a wee bit more background. MC gives us a good description of Rachel, vague descriptions of the others, but next to nothing about wife Shari. When she leans over the chair on the beach, we learn she has tits. It takes two pages to gather he has little or no sex life w/wife. She doesn't even recognize the smell in the room in the morning. Knowing this earlier would have made the risk he was taking more understandable.

Hot as hell. The first look, the flirting, the chase, the excitement, and finally the climax. Hot.