All Comments on 'Show & Tell Ch. 17'

It seems he is now using her in a not so nice way. I guess I just had a different perception of where this story was heading. It is becoming more of a slut story. This is just as bad as being repressed. It is just at the other far side of the spectrum.

Waverunner

There is really no indication of what his long term goal is. Where is he going with this? He sounds like a Steve Wallace character: "I really love you very much and to prove it you can go screw any person you want because it makes me happy". Is that it?

This has wandered so far from how it started it's become a completely different story and one that I'm really not enjoying any more.

I'll give it another chapter or two but I'm so disappointed in the direction it's taken.