All Comments on 'Show & Tell Ch. 01: The Seduction'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Pretty sure this lies under erotic enounter than romance. Because there really isn't anything romantic about a cheating husband or a teacher who after a few brief visits just has to screw her student's father. But it was a nicely written story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Good first story. I hope this is the first in à story series

ttom76ttom76over 11 years ago
Well told but ...

I my opinion, you left out the best part, how they got to the point where he was so gentlemanly and warned her. You jumped right in as if this were an erotic encounter rather than a developing relationship. Still, very good.

DmitryDmitryover 11 years ago
I

think that this was a perfect ending. The story should remain the same. Incredible.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
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This should be the first of a long series

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