All Comments on 'Shower Lust'

Reminds me of my mother in law and me.

I didn't like the end.

My ex-girlfriend and I used to live in a home with a dual shower, it was often fun having sexy showers together.

Good story. I wish I had a mother like this.

5-stars.

I thought it had a lot of promise. It started slowly with a believable storyline, some hesitation and all went well , gradually getting more intimate and the eventual blowjob.

However, I think there were several paragraphs missing at this point, as straight from the BJ, she was immediately sitting on his cock with no further foreplay from him to her. That would have been more natural and sexier.

Did you rush it to get to the fucking part?

I think so.

Shame

Reminds me of washing my mother's back in the bathtub. Then, I asked her if I could wash her front. Then, I picked her up out of the bathtub and fucked her over the sink.

It's totally unbelievable, sorry I took the time to read this

Could you write a better ending?

There are ways, and the reality is this ending wasn't bad, except for two words: THE END.

Taht cost you stars.

Juvenile and third grade. You're an adult, telling adult stories to other adults. We know when the words stop.

Great story. Would be better without all the “slut” language at the end. It wasn’t natural at all and detracted from what was a perfectly plausible story. I think you could’ve let it end without the future telling too…

Awesome, fantastic story. Mom would never let me cross.the line with her but she knew how I felt about her. I'm just not sure how she felt about me. She would allow me to spy on her & use her panties but she never said anything. Tried to make a move on her & she stopped me but didn't yell & fuss at me. So perhaps I should've tried harder or more often.

Logically well developed story. Plot believable. The one thing I do not understand about this story is why a mature, educated man lacks the intelligency to see his mother as a woman. They have know each other for his entire life. They realize the love, safety and security they provide each other. Their adoration, respect and emotional chemistry between the two could not be damaged, even if one declined the relationship. I enjoy stories where the couple realize love has no boundaries; nothing is forbidden between consenting lovers.

Well written and believable but I thought the ending was a bit weak, like the story just petered out. The emotions just went away???? Maybe, but I didn't care for it.

Awesome story loved how mom figured out what her son wanted did not care much for the ending you should have had them having more sex and the led them slowly drift apart! Still gave it 5 stars !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great read. Well written. Loved the shower sex and build up.

I made move for my mom saw her massive tits bouncing in her night gown just walked up ripped it open she stood there in shock grabbed tit sucked on her extra large brown nipple pushed on to living room floor took off my clothes then shoved my cock in her mouth I lifted her legs buried my face into hairy cunt made her scream cum on my face then pushed my cock down her throat till shot my sperm down her throat pulled out of her mouth then flipped her on her stomach rammed my cock up her cunt she screamed while I pound her hard making her orgasm real hard once we finished told me you might become father couple days later she told me carrying your kid in me I was 17 at time she was 38 we both still fuck each other have son together he just turned eighteen have threesome with her she near 70 still likes to fuck she been letting are son and his friends fuck her anytime they want we all did full hardcore creampie with her she went full weekend told us all that wanted more gangbangs she yelled plus I am your sperm bank to deposit in me

Well written, but (for me) way too "wham bam thank you mam" sorry...

He won't run with his mother because he wants to clear his mind before his interview, but showering with her is just fine.

Your stories are almost perfect then you miss that one obvious error. Read them several times before submitting.

really needs a chapter 2

I am horny. Tell me more.