All Comments on 'Shower Time'

Very hot, I liked it alot! I love showers...

Very hot, definately keep writing you are very good.

Your imagery is very precise and you really take your readers along with you as you tell this story. Very well done.

LadyFalcon:

The story has it all; Love, Eroticism, Humor, and everything else that makes a worthwhile read. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Very nice, love the different elements!

This was fun and erotic! I enjoyed reading it. Congrats on a succesful first story!

For a first attempt I thought it was excellent, it was erotic and had some humor.

Nicely done, LadyFalcon. It reminded me of times when me and the missus have had playtime in the shower. Somehow, our water never stays hot. ;) Keep writing. I'd like to read more.

Tony

Great story! Very descriptive!

There's nothing better than sharing a shower with someone you love. Nice story. You should write more.

Excellent erotic verse !

Why oh why have you not done more like this?

They feel so relaxed and loving with each other!

More, please? :+))