All Comments on 'Showing Off My Trophy Husband Ch. 01'

It is a shame that you spoilt your story with a poor choice of names. I had to re-read the opening paragraphs several times to work out that Apollo and Pol are the same person.

The use of St. James for a surname is also a poor choice IMPO. Every time I read it I thought of a church, pub or an hotel. Or a station on the London Underground.

The names s

Thanks for the comment. I'll keep that in mind next time.

Great premise. Weak execution. I thought she was going to show the neighbors that she got to dominate her husband. But what the neighbors saw made her look like the sub, forced to suck him off while the neighbors watched.

Good premise.

But sex is too rushed. Too matter-of-fact. Too automatic.

And seriously lacks details.

Three stars.

Nicely written- I was disappointed that it ended so quickly- a bit more drama between Pol and Amy and more of her showing off his place in the relationship would have been nice

really hot

I wish my wife did that to me