All Comments on 'Showing Out'

Welcome back - as strong as ever. Powerful imagery, and the undercurrent is that the woman is always in control of the situation. I love the buzz of seeing a naked woman - there doesn't have to be sex involved, it is the sheer delight of the naked form, whether it be a glimpse through a blouse button, a second of a split skirt flash, or the tenderness of the soft skin. Thank you

I think this is one of the hottest submissions I have ever read. Cat, oh how I wish that could have been one of the 12!! Just your pic on your bio turns me on. As you described the development of your relationship with Paul and then the group web cam session, I can only imagine! Very well written and the image ... oh my ... Your husband is one lucky bastard. Does the story develop? Thanks for sharing!

I would have enjoyed it if some of the sections were fleshed out into full stories. REALLY enjoyed it though.

If not this writer is definitely one. And 1* !!!

So now I see a bit more of your erotic mind, nice set up, good progression with the desire to expose. Loved the use of the web cam to keep Cat secure from allowing herself to go all the way!

Another terrific read Cat! So deliciously erotic! Oh how fun it would be to be one of the 12!

I know it was not necessarily your intent, but i feel like you have opened up a whole new world for me to share with my online lovers. I'm still not fully committed to going too far too fast, but you have given me reason to pause...and then maybe move to new levels. Thank you.