All Comments on 'Shy Guys Make Good Boys Pt. 02'

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Harpy18Harpy18almost 3 years ago

Damn, makes me wish I had a cock so I could feel trapped in a cage! Not sure I'll ever get enough of Sulfur's stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I think you need to increase the dosage of your pills, you are clearly slipping down a very slippery slope. Hope you get better soon.

LindsayMurrayLindsayMurrayalmost 3 years ago

Oh my god. This is so different from your other M/s stories, but I love it SO MUCH. Just warmed my heart.

ontsurtontsurtalmost 3 years ago

Wow what a read. It felt real was intense and what an absolutely loving dynamic. I'm not sure if it's the FM perspective but somehow it resonated (even) more than your previous Sulphur stories. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please keep the story going it was amazing

mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsover 2 years ago

Thanks for sharing your wonderful writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I enjoyed reading this, even if the other Sulfur stories are more my speed. These two are beautifully drawn.

EssEssCehEssEssCehover 2 years ago

I usually don't read Femdom/Malesub because it usually doesn't do nothing for me.

I'm so happy I made an exeption for this one. The characters, the emotional descriptions, the happy story completly ofset the fact that the sex scenes of themselfs didn't do nothing for me.

Another indications what an extraordinary writer you are.

5 Stars - duh...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wonderful as always, one of the better writers on here

I love how each story is unique yet overlaps x

This one was even better for the mention of my favourite book series (The sword of truth series) and the group of women young me always wanted to be (Mord sith) x

5/5 always

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wonderfully written 🙏 highly understandable description of submissive and dominant feelings. never read anything like this before. Thank You 🙏

LindsayMurrayLindsayMurrayover 2 years ago

I just reread this story. Aaah I love it so much.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It took me a long time to decide to read this. Aligned to many of the toys fears of it not being her readers usual bag. Brilliantly written and a great story. I shouldn't have worried.

Begs the question- is it autobiographical?

CatrinasslaveCatrinasslavealmost 2 years ago

I stumbled upon your work earlier and have read the entire story in just a few hours, in between running my chores. What an exceptional talent you have, the differing viewpoints between Domme and sub are really something I relate to.

I'll definitely be recommending this to my Mistress. Thankyou so much and a follow up visit to this couple would be most welcome.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

It´scalong time since your last publish. I hope you´re all right.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Where is Kara Rhys? You have disappeared like she has. Come back to us with more stories!! You are such a wonderful writer.

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A cat person with no specific gender preference is nyanbinary. Okay, an update on Payne Hall’s hall of... joy! This is a pending “bad idea” notice. Once a story is approved, it will post, but this one isn’t Sulfur’s and it’s not as long as usual. The title is “Cry Little Sis...

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