by ClosetSkeleton
Keeping it really nice and slow in detail.. Great writing
would be complete, without an Indian Wives stinker?
Some of these commenters are clearly showing they are idiots. So what if you are still becoming fluent, you still write well enough that I hope you continue. The story is good and well done, and although you don't always use the right terms, it is easy to still understand what you are saying. Only practice will continue to make the skill better.
It's also educational for Americans who are nowadays woefully ignorant. When she says she is afraid they may burn her alive, that isn't much of a hollow statement nor far from the truth.
That all said, I would have liked a bit more details in the sex-scene parts. I hope you continue.
good effort dude!! keep it up
you have now a very good platform.. start putting more kinky sex
and this will be a super hit.
A word of caution don't mind those negative comments !!
Your stories are so boring. Too much detail information which are not required
only an indian can appreciate this story.,...well done bro...