All Comments on 'Shy Indian Wife Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Awesome continuation

Keeping it really nice and slow in detail.. Great writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
And what day at loving wives

would be complete, without an Indian Wives stinker?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
1*

illiterate cuck shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Some of these commenters are clearly showing they are idiots. So what if you are still becoming fluent, you still write well enough that I hope you continue. The story is good and well done, and although you don't always use the right terms, it is easy to still understand what you are saying. Only practice will continue to make the skill better.

It's also educational for Americans who are nowadays woefully ignorant. When she says she is afraid they may burn her alive, that isn't much of a hollow statement nor far from the truth.

That all said, I would have liked a bit more details in the sex-scene parts. I hope you continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice build up

good effort dude!! keep it up

you have now a very good platform.. start putting more kinky sex

and this will be a super hit.

A word of caution don't mind those negative comments !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Boring storie

Your stories are so boring. Too much detail information which are not required

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
one of the best ones i read ...

only an indian can appreciate this story.,...well done bro...

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Fluency

Fluency in any language will not make this POS cuck story any better.

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